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  • [建议]为了提高大家的英语作文水平~本版作为一个写作专区~欢迎大家投稿~并相互批改~
为了提高大家的写做水平和写作兴趣~本版作为写作专区~并有经验丰富的老师对您的作文进行批改~并有相应的奖励措施~
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第一期作文题目
话题作文.computer and life
要求120字左右.有感而发.
2006-7-30 13:13:04
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i like to playing computer,Play computer is my life.
2006-8-2 11:08:30
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i like to playing computer too,Play computer is my life too.
2006-9-23 12:32:33
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Play computer, Is there any other good words to describe it?
2006-10-22 16:42:58
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Thank you!
2006-10-26 16:37:48
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Computer ha
2006-11-13 14:56:29
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Computers have been playing a more important role in people’s life recent years. We use it when we work, study, relax. People can chat and communicate with each other through internet. The computers and nets make us closer mentally, though the real distance is very long. We get the latest information from the net. We buy something fond and learn online without leaving home, or just in your office, etc. That’s convenient. We use the computer to deposit and deal with data. It can help us to work efficiently. In a word, computers are the indispensable things for people.
2006-11-13 15:29:15
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I only know one thing, in my office, all the staff they use computer to play games. when work finished, playtime start.
2006-11-22 15:39:53
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不错的贴子,希望多多发文章上来。
2006-11-28 14:06:59
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先多谢楼主...
2006-12-29 1:56:12
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